Book Review 1

As in Eden

• The characteristics were well explained
• The language could of been better
• The setting was good

This book is about god and religions.

They fled.The bright calm green and  sunlight rippling of the river,the fruit scent ,the scent of lilies and gentle in closing shades of the trees-that were collapsing  around them.They were folding into nameless things.They fled from the horror and voiceless howling surrounding them.The family was not welcome anywhere .The kids were familiar of the places they went,they had to learn in school. Every couple of days they hunted and hunted for food and shelter. Every night they starved and begged for forgiveness. Ishmael the dad  never begged  or wanted all he did was pray.

The first time they reached another  place they set up camp and stayed till they were healthy again. They hardly ever got better though because they gave the food to the kids.Everyone was worried they might get tracked down and held captive. They never stayed for long because they needed to reach their destination which was Eden.Toroa the only girl wondered if she could run but her muscles were badly hurt and she had bites everywhere.Her mother  Samlie wanted the best for her children but they could never have a bright future because of there dark  past. Misral the son wanted to hunt like his dad and be a warrior.

They were so happy  they weren’t haunted down,they had a nice future ahead.

The writer can express feelings in a good way .Its amazing and tells you what can happen in the real world.The writer explained the characters nicely and the words could of been better.The setting was good.